Mastering your auditions is the key to getting great roles. Pay close attention to the initial cold reads below, and then the readings after some coaching. Be sure to watch all of the auditions, not just your own. This will give you some more insight on how to effectively analyze and break down a script on your own.
Keep in mind--most of these improvements came from about 90 seconds of coaching. Can you imagine how you'll grow as an actor when you've had some time to work on the script even more?